Monster-of-the-Week Mystery: The Late Show

A draft of my very first attempt at a Monster of the Week Mystery. Feedback please!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7cav44145d9dUhLX0RpR2xLS2s/view?usp=sharing

Sargasso Sea

A New Dungeon Starter:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7cav44145d9dFBFQVpjTzJadlE/view?usp=sharing

ARIEL(Sings) 

Full fathom five thy father lies. 

Of his bones are coral made. 

Those are pearls that were his eyes. 

Nothing of him that doth fade, 

But doth suffer a sea-change 

Into something rich and strange.

―THE TEMPEST (Act 1, Scene 2)

Words of Wisdom